Response #2 - Week 5

I really enjoyed this poem or in a sense a prayer. I thought the first line is weak but it carries on from there into an enjoyable ride. You make it personal to the reader with the "fill in the blank" moments of the poem. The last stanza throws me off from the rest of the piece however and almost feels like another piece of work entirely compared to the rest of the poem. So maybe smooth that out a little better. Very nice job.