Response #2 - Week 3

I really enjoyed this. It was very lively and pained a terrific picture. I felt it was slightly cliched to say "Overlooked like the right answer" as though it was a little cheesy in quality but still a good line. i am also unsure about that "recyle, reuse" line, it seems to "go green" in nature and takes away from the effect of the poem slightly. But nothing to the extreme where it causes great issue. It is still an excellent piece of poetry you have written.