Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Improving - week 4

Robin Redbreast, The Pardon, Dead Horse, Traveling Through the Dark

A row of the damned walking in single file. 
Feet can not take them as far as they crave. 
A funeral pyre ready to behold the fragility of life. 
Brutes and beasts lacking class and disposition. 
Muddy with sores and raw debilitated skin, 
The animals groan anticipating death, 
A freedom from suffering and betrayal. 


I wanted to write a snippet of a dead animal poem so i tried to depict the line for slaughter.  

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