response 2 - week 11

This is a very interesting piece. As for minor comments, the guessing of the year should only have one date and the i loved the nectar and peached line. I love what you are doing in regards of playing off the Cinderella story. The end with the sandal is a nice fit. I love the specificity it makes it more unique and narrowed down to one particular instance in a real life scene. Otherwise its a great piece of work.